Genius, Read The World

I will definitely be one of those shameless author’s to review their own work, I believe it’s worth the read you can give me feedback!  I accept constructive criticism as long as you arent just shitting on my work. I am a novice that’s literally my name lol

I like this story, the character development is already so fascinating that I just can't stop reading myself. The overview is very different from other books which is why I like it. Keep it up author.

the Author is just......the way suffering and sorrow is portrayed, it's unusual.and the Protag doesn't really know much in the way of happiness and unhappiness, too.her innocence has tugged on my heartstrings!few suggestions would be: 1st, hurry and kill Jules.2nd, i suggest you put some attention to spellings; because of the nice flow of story, it can be understood, either way, what you mean. but it has the potential to disrupt reading flow, too.it's a nice read, trust me. I wonder what more the Author have in-store.

I think I dont to say anything right?!Just give us more nice stories!!!!

She nodded slowly and trying to recall the face of the killer of General Stephen.

So much to do, so much to see

As she does the sparks of mana which had been hiding from behind a veil of mana slowly appeared.

[You have killed 5/10 goblins.]